Peacock, a short film that escaped…

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Vishesh Mankal

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Peacock, a short film that escaped…

From the start only one thing was clear in my mind. It was that I had to make this film a satisfying experience; not just for me but for anyone who watches it. Chronologically this would be my fourth film. My first was well received by my teachers, colleagues and friends. But then somewhere along the line, I got pretentious and started making films for the sole purpose of getting attention. Maybe I was hoping that the fact that I got a movie made would make people overlook my mistakes and shortcomings. But that wasn’t to be and I learnt it the hard way. I don’t know what films should be like, whether one kind of film is better than the other, but one thing I learnt from my films was that nobody wants to be bored, which is exactly what was happening. Although my technical abilities were always praised, my skills as a storyteller were dismissed by and large. But I didn’t pay heed to anyone’s words. I told myself and my crew that the fault was with the people, not with us. I told them that people don’t understand good cinema and so on. I was undoubtedly too arrogant to see my own faults. So, I decided to make a film with absolutely zero sensibilities in the hope that I could bring myself down to the levels of my audience. It was an action film that never got made. I am thankful for that, for, in retrospect, it was a terrible film. Then, I decided to take the social message route and made a film called “Silent Night”. In retrospect that film was also bad. In fact, now I really regret ever making that film. That is when I realized that I had hit rock bottom, that it wasn’t going to get any worse than this, or should I say, I decided that I wasn’t going to let it get any worse. That is when the idea for “Peacock” came to me. It was a perfect film to get back on the wagon, as it offered me enough meat as a filmmaker and promised to be a film that people would enjoy.

So, in between all the other work I had to do for my upcoming college projects (music video and the final diploma film), I developed the screenplay for “Peacock”. It took me about twenty five days and two drafts to get right. Eventually, we formed a crew and started having production meetings. All in all, we had about three weeks of pre-production time, during which we managed to get in trouble with the college authorities, send out audition calls, and arrange for everything we needed. We took the “beg, borrow or steal” approach (not that we ever got around to stealing). We all pooled in money for this project. Earlier, it was only I that paid for the finances, without keeping track of the money spent. We decided to keep things in control this time. All in all, we managed to raise a budget of just over nineteen thousand rupees. A day before the auditions, however, we got sort of blacklisted from our college in relation to a very complicated affair. So we had no place to hold the auditions, as this movie was already being made on a shoe-string budget. We eventually held them in a park. All the actors who turned up were very sporty though. In about three hour’s time, we had our principal cast chosen and briefed. All the actors were so excited about doing this film that they memorized their dialogues, figured out their costumes with the Art Department and all in all got ready for their parts within a week’s time.

Principal photography began on 15th of March, 2008. We had a very tight three-day schedule to shoot the movie in. On the first day, well, everything went wrong. It’s always the same thing on first days of principal photography; nobody trusts each other, the actors are insecure, the production manager has a lot of running around to do and so on. But even though I had experienced all that before, I have to say that the first day of principal photography on this film was a total disaster. To begin with, the camera that we got (a SONY PD-170) had a faulty viewfinder and to make it worse, that day we were shooting only outdoors. This meant that our Director of Photography had to set the exposure through the LCD, which is always a struggle. Then, the camera attendant had not brought a boom-rod, stating that we should have asked for it specifically (Strangely enough, the boom-mic came without asking). After giving him a piece of our minds, we graduated onto a bigger problem. One of the actresses had an unforeseen problem and came a few hours late. We had two very small scenes to shoot without her, after which we were sitting around for a good while waiting for her. Then, with tempers rising with the day’s mercury, we got around to shooting the other scenes. Since a lot of the actors were first timers, they didn’t realize that acting is a waiting game. Needless to say that everyone was everywhere and things were getting out of my control. But, we kept at it. Our sole aim was to get all the shots done. At one point a rough crowd gathered around us as we were shooting a solo scene with one of the actresses. Rude remarks were flying around and I really have to give it to my actress who kept her cool and delivered the best of performances, take after take. One actor in particular gave us a lot of trouble, though. I found out later that he was somewhat not right in the head and a junkie. He turned out to be a big headache later on. And then to top it all, an important crew member fell ill and had to take rest. But at the end of the day, despite all the problems we faced, we got all the shots we needed and covered all the scenes we set out to cover. On the first day, we finished only an hour behind schedule.

So, after a rough night’s sleep, we all got together for the second day’s shoot. It was a lot easier for everybody as we were shooting in a relatively controlled environment. We were shooting interviews that day and our Set Designers did a wonderful job of making it look very studio like with only one black curtain, a few light-stands, a chair and a room that was no more than fifteen feet across on either side. We had one lighting set-up, which we tweaked as per the requirement of the shot. One problem loomed large over our heads though. It was the beginning of summer and Noida was already beginning to suffer its annual power shortage problems. We had opted to not bring a generator along for two reasons. One was that we were shooting in a residential area on a Sunday and it wouldn’t be right to create so much noise. The other was that we were not sure how much money we might end up needing for contingency. So, we kept our fingers crossed and continued with the task. But as soon as we set up the first shot, we lost electricity. The Landlady told us that if we didn’t get power back in another fifteen minutes, it would be gone for the whole day. Turns out, it was only a momentary loss. We got electricity back after a few minutes. After that we kept loosing power for a few short minutes at regular intervals, but it wasn’t bad enough to make us stop shooting. The biggest problem that day happened when our junkie friend that I mentioned about earlier opted out of the film. We lost all contact with him and I was told by another actor that he wanted to be paid for the job. We had made it clear in the beginning that we wouldn’t be paying anybody. Seems he didn’t get the message. For a while, a gloomy air shrouded the set and some of us were beginning to think that this movie will never get finished. Then I remembered a very good friend of mine, who had acted in one of my films previously. I called him up and he came promptly, proving to be a much better choice for the role eventually. I will forever be indebted to him for rescuing us in time of need. Anyway, once more we finished the day on schedule. We all felt a little better about ourselves that day, for we all felt that we had been through the worse and emerged victorious.

The third day was a mixture of indoor and outdoor scenes. For one, we had to re-shoot all the scenes involving the dropped actor. And then get on with the original schedule. It proved to be a good day overall. By then, everyone trusted each other and there was an air of camaraderie on the set. Once more, we kept up with the schedule and finished the film on time. Even though we had only been together for three days, the last few moments were very emotional. There was a sense of accomplishment, but there was also a sense of disappointment at the whole thing being over. As for me, I was just beginning to enjoy myself. But then again everything that has a beginning has an end. At least ours was happy.

The editing took me around a month. I remember being utterly dissatisfied with myself for a long time. I felt the film was slow, boring and simply not what I wanted it to be. Then, a few inspired decisions later, I was happy again. My Director of Photography also provided original music for the film, which we recorded over two days. Then, a week before I was slated to begin principal photography for my grad film, we showed the film to our first audience. It was a success, with the teachers praising it overall, and everyone else enjoying it. Ultimately, this film is the closest I have yet gotten to creating something that I think turned out better than how I intended it to. So, without further delay, I will provide you with the links for the YouTube version of the film. I am sorry for the bad quality. It is all I could manage as right now I am out of station in a place that offers limited internet connectivity.

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Kindly watch the film and give me your comments. All views are welcome. The film is about 25 minutes long. It shouldn’t be a drag, though. I worked hard on making this film watch-able and I hope it doesn’t bore any of you.

CAST (in order of appearance): 1) Abhishek Ahluwalia as Prabhakar, 2) Prateek Jain as Hasan, 3) Jyoti Mahi as Sahila, 4) Mamta Mankal as Pramiti, 5) Rajat Bhatia as Mayur, 6) Kamna Mathur as Lakshita, 7) Bharat Bhoo Shaan as Balvir, 8) Czar Routray as Eknath

Written, Edited & DIRECTED BY: Vishesh Mankal

DIRECTOR OF PHOTOGRAPHY: Advyth O. Herur

ASSISTANT PHOTOGRAPHERS: Praveen R. and Rhyme Jasuja

ART & COSTUMES: Nahan Gomroki and Karma Dendup

SOUND RECORDING: Rupam Bhakat and Vivek Sharma

CHIEF ASSISTANT DIRECTOR: Yogesh Chaturvedi

SET DESIGN AND DECORATION: Nahan Gomroki, Yogesh Chaturvedi and Kamna Mathur

MUSIC COMPOSED & PERFORMED BY: Advyth O. Herur

PRODUCTION MANAGER: Chandramani

PRODUCED BY: Vishesh Mankal, Advyth O. Herur, Nahan Gomroki, Karma Dendup, Rhyme Jasuja, Praveen R., Chandramani, Yogesh Chaturvedi, Rupam Bhakat

 

17 Comments

  1. manoj manoj says:

    Well made dude. I remembered “Utsab” by Rituparno Ghosh while watching this one. The theme is same. A single event is perceived by different people in a different way. Every one seems natural at the event itself but….. You mentioned that you have made sure that the movie is not boring. I must tell you that the movies which I like now when I saw them first time I thought that they were boring.

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  2. Gopi Puthran Gopi Puthran says:

    Vishesh, I thoroughly enjoyed your film. The characters with their own quirks were nicely etched out. Balvir as a character remains my favourite. First rate performances by -Kamna Mathur and Jyoti Mahi. While Bharat Bhooshan and Czar Routray added a lot to their characters by just being themselves.

    I believe that any good film appeals to you instinctivly, which this film did. Great going! Keep it up :)

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  3. ag ag says:

    The links dont seem to work.Please provide links tht work
    Thanks

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  4. ag ag says:

    Good Attempt!. The links do seem to be working! Sorry some problem !

    Kamna Mathur was good… Just thought that the music at the end was a tad too loud.

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  5. Mainak Mainak says:

    Very good work Vishesh.
    The dialogues were the best i have heard about college students in a indian film about college students. It was real. The actors were pretty good. The actresses rocked. They were all perfect.
    Now the issues i had. I thought the dream sequences were unnecessary. Removing them will make the film a lot tighter.
    I didnt like some of the monologues in the end. Esp the one with ponytail who looks like a bollywood struggler.
    I am pointing out such things because i liked your idea & film. I hope honest opinions & reactions to your films will help you tremendously.

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  6. Vishesh Mankal Vishesh Mankal says:

    Thanks for the comments guys. Glad you liked it.
    Manoj -
    Although I am big admirer of Rituparno Ghosh, I have a bit of confession to make. I haven’t seen “Utsab” yet. But I’ll get around it. My knowledge of Bengali cinema is limited to Satyajit Ray, some films of Ritwik Ghatak and Mrinal Sen. Glad it reminded you of a film made by such a great filmmaker though! And what you said about films you found boring at first ending up being your favourite films is true for me also. But that is usually after repeated viewings. A nobody like me does not have the luxury of people watching my films over and over again. So, it is a matter of grabbing attention from the word go. Anyway, thanks for your comments.
    Gopi –
    Glad you liked the film!
    ag -
    I agree with you about the music being a bit too loud at the end. I only had a day or so to lay down the music track after recording it, as I had to start working on my grad film the same week. I agree that it could have been worked on a bit more.
    Mainak -
    I submitted this film here so that I could get some constructive criticism. I appreciate every word you wrote and thanks for pointing out what you didn’t like. A lot of people refrain from doing that. There was some thought behind the dream sequences and it was that during the scripting stage, I couldn’t find a bridge between Act II and Act III, so it was a rather hurried decision as we were slated to begin principal photography in a couple of weeks. Thanks for your comments, anyhow. I assure you they will prove useful.
    And if anyone else has anything to say, kindly do so, for I always believe that a negative reaction is better than no reaction at all!

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  7. Sumanth Sumanth says:

    A very interesting film Vishesh… Great work!!
    Like Mainak said, even my grouse against the film is about the dream sequence (Esp. the fight between Hasan & Mayur) and Eknath’s monologue at the end…. For me, these 2 scenes disturbed the (otherwise wonderful) flow of the film… All said and done, loved it!!!
    Good luck!

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  8. Mainak Mainak says:

    People dont give constructive opinions because the films are usually shit. With nothing good to write about. In such a case its hard to balance your criticism, as there are only bad things to say.
    So when people point out small things that didnt work for them, that means something worked.

    Your lead actor looked the part. He reminded me one of TUM BIN’s lead. Sudhenshu or something.
    Can you make another cut without the dream sequences & upload them on youtube? And also remove the last part where you show how the interviews end?

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  9. Vishesh Mankal Vishesh Mankal says:

    Mainak, I don’t think I’ll be able to re-edit this film. Psychologically, I think I am done with it for now. I do understand your gripe with the dream sequence, however, how do you think the film should end if not with the monologues ? Which point would be feel the most comfortable ending this film then if not where it is now?
    I guess you mean Rajat Bhatia, the actor who played Mayur? Yes, he fit the part very well and he is a fine actor too. He played the lead role in my last film also.
    And Sumanth, glad you liked it!

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  10. Inca Inca says:

    Hi Vishesh,

    Looks interesting. But Videos 2 & 3 aren’t working. Re-upload please.

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  11. Vishesh Mankal Vishesh Mankal says:

    Inca, the links are up, I think there must have been some problem when you tried. Try again. The videos are there.

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  12. Xion Xion says:

    Hey Vishal,

    which camera did you use to shot this movie?

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  13. Arash Arash says:

    hi

    i am an iranian filmmaker, your film looks interesting, maybe it was more better if it was alittle shorter, but still i enjoyed to watch that and it is a good project. i made . rare you interested to work with me and make movies toghether ?

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  14. sg sg says:

    hi vishesh, the movie was quite interesting. i enjoyed it overall.. its not slow and boring, maybe bit jarring at the dream sequence..the part the actress refuses to leave the studio is funny. ;)

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  15. kartik krishnan kartik krishnan says:

    sorry to watch it realy late … its a rather nice film ….
    just my grouse with the fight scene and the guy with the pony tail as mainak said …

    keep making more films …really nice …liked it

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  16. chandra mani chandra mani says:

    dada,
    i got the news,,, be a part of this movie m feeling gr8. but first of all congrates dada for this achievement. right now m in mumbai but i ll be there in delhi on 1st and 2nd nov and being one of the producers of this great film, I will be definatly there in the festival.

    chalo dada
    tke care,

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