The Final Judgement

PROJEKT iVIEW   | Movies, Talking-Points | January 9, 2009 at 7:47 am

iView Author: Rajesh Kotian (Mumbai, India)
Email: rajesh.kotian [at] gmail.com

The Final Judgement

A Short story of a Powerful Indian Mafia Don who cracks down the betrayals and gives them a chance of honesty.

There are two characters one is the Don himself and his henchman who betrayed him. The story depicts the patience and terror of the don and the way he makes his final Judgment.
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The Judgement

INT. DARK ROOM — NIGHT

A Table with two cups of tea and chairs are been placed in that dark room. Two guys are talking to each other. HARILAL,45, a tall huge fair guy dressed in white Patani sitting on chair, leaning towards the table staring at a guy who is sitting opposite to him. He is BAANYA,35, a fat guy with his bear belly, dark and medium height, looks old for his age due to the grey hairs on his head. He is wearing a black untidy shirt and having his sip of tea .

In the middle of the table an ashtray is kept and someone has just finished smoking as a thin layer of smoke emerges from the tray into the darkness Harilal in a heavy voice

HARILAL
(Looking seriously)
Hey, Do you know why have I called you?

Baanya , bit casual and hold the cup of tea in his hand
BAANYA
(Sipping)
Hmm

HARILAL
(Relaxs Backwark)
Baanya, we have been working for last ten years and you had been my best assistance. The bullet which you had taken for me …

(Pauses)
..I vow you that

Baanya keeps the cup down and looks very seriously towards harilal
BAANYA
What happened happened Bhai. You look so serious..Any problem.. tell me .I am here for you.Just order
HARILAL
I am worried about my last consignment which got raided by the cops .you know the worth of it..Its millions and I feel some one has betrayed us.
BAANYA
Who’s that ..Tell me bhai ..I will show him the route to hell
Harilal takes a pause and looks at the smoke which is cumming from the half finishes cigarette on the table
HARILAL
Whenever there’s fire..there’s smoke.and they both come from same place.

Its not so difficult to stop the fire but to stop the smoke it takes time.
(Pause)
I know who had been messing around.

Tension emerges on Baanya’s face. His hand moves towards his shirt pocket. He takes out a packet of cigarette and lights it.
BAANYA
Who’s it ,Bhai? Tell me ..
(Pause)
I’ll Chop him into Pieces

Nervousness make Baanya uncomfortable and he stammers and he starts to take more puffs from his cigarette

HARILAL
Just shot him and get the money ..
(pause)

nothing else doing

BAANYA
Dunn worry bhai ..you just tell me ..i.(Puffs)
.ll..(puffs)

HARILAL
Why are you so tensed ..Are you alright or you need something

There is wickedness in Harilal’s eyes and he knew something which baanya don’t

BAANYA
(Irritated)
Bhai..I JUST want to know his NAME!!!

After a long pause .. Harilal leans forward towards Baanya. There’s eye contact between two of them and then
HARILAL
It’s Motilal ..My TWIN Brother

Baanya’s Face turns Red in anger
HARILAL
(Handing over the gun and paper)
Will you do it for me, Baanya

Baanya nods his head and takes away the gun ..as an acceptance for the task.

HARILAL
(Sternly)
The paper has his location… Don’t Miss it and make sure you get the money

Baanya gets up . Pushes his gun behind his pants and walks away

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TWO DAYS LATER
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INT. DARK ROOM — NIGHT

Baanya enters the room in a great speed. He is sweating but there is a blink of satisfaction for the work he had done. Harilal is sitting on the opposite side of the table , rotating the automatic pistol with his index finger

BAANYA
(Placing himself on the chair)
Bhai ..Work done.. Motilal is terminated

Harilal not looking at Baanya , puts his head down

HARILAL
(Seriously)
Where is the money

BAANYA
(Bit Tensed)
Bhai we manage to kill Motilal but …

HARILAL
(Not Looking up)
But What baanya..where is the Money

Baanya trying to get his cigarette from his pocket

BAANYA
Actually Motilal told me that he doesnt have the money ..He lost it ..I Tortured him for 2 days then i killed him

(Pause)
..Money should be at his place only ..We need to search

HARILAL
(Lifting his face)
Who killed Motilal?? ..Huh

No Answer from Baanya as he is confused now

HARILAL
It’s Me..I killed him a year ago when he betrayed me just like you did to me.

Baanya is in state of shock..loose his cigratte and he trembles with fear.

HARILAL
Day before ..you didn’t shot motilal and that was me ..I had the money with me ..which you took thinking that motilal was dead..

No reaction from Baanya
HARILAL
I gave you a chance to prove your honesty and now…..
Lifting the Automatic pistol and pointing it towards Baanya

HARILAL
Its the JUDGMENT Time..

Harilal pull of the trigger and bullet goes right inside Baanya’s head ..Spilling out the blood like splash of water and crashing Baanya down on the floor. Harilal watches him and dials on his number
HARILAL
Disco..Where are you ..Come and meet me
THE END

1 Comment

1. Amit Mishra says:

   January 9, 2009 at 9:12 am

   bahot suna suna sa lag raha hai. good attempt nonetheless. its like except for the twin thing, sabkuch dekha hua hai.

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